| Q: While completing a summer camp evaluation survey, I was not sure whether to use a singular or plural verb for this sentence: "The staff (was/were) very friendly throughout the session." Which is correct? -- Leonard Slutsky, Glastonbury, Conn.
A: Glad to hear you were, literally, "a happy camper"!
You should choose a singular or plural verb for collective nouns, such as "staff," "team," "family" and "committee," based on whether you're considering the group as a single unit or as a collection of individuals.
Grammarians refer to this principle as "notional agreement," the kind of esoteric phrase that earns them low scores for user-friendliness on evaluation surveys. They simply mean that your verb should agree with your notion of how the group is functioning in your sentence.
So, if you were thinking mostly of the staff's friendliness when it was acting as a unit, such as during the staff versus campers tug-of-war or the big closing number at the "Staff Follies," you'd say "the staff was friendly."
But if you were thinking mostly of acts of friendliness by distinct individuals, such as a congenial food server, a cordial lifeguard or an amicable morning bugler, you'd say "the staff were friendly."
Americans tend to favor singular verbs with collective nouns ("team is skilled," "government is acting"), while the Brits tend to use plural verbs ("team are skilled," "government are acting"), which leads Americans to give Brits low scores for sanity.
Q: A pro hockey coach recently said, "We have a tall task going against a good team who is playing well." I think "that" would be a better word than "who." What do you think? -- Art Frackenpohl, Potsdam, N.Y.
A: Hey, another question involving collective nouns!
Normally, I prefer the use of "who" rather than "that" to describe human beings. But, in this case, I'm with you. I'd choose "that" because of -- ta-da! -- notional agreement.
By saying "IS playing well," the coach indicated he was thinking of the team as a single unit, not a collection of individuals. And because "who" denotes people, it simply sounds odd to refer to such an entity as "who."
But if the coach had said "ARE playing well," indicating he was thinking of the team as a collection of individuals, "who" would be the better choice.
Perhaps, by choosing "who," the hockey coach was offering a mischievous spoof of notional agreement. Call him "puckish."
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